Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Little Embers


Little embers upon waxed lips
Their warmth a familiar smile
Caressed in an elegant bliss
As brows sweat and unfurrow
Sliding hands across her hips
So gentle is her gleeful guile
A hiccup laugh I will never miss
As we squirm together commando

Shades of grey she slowly strips
Her chest heaving the extra mile
A finger stroking along the canvas
Drawing a gasp from this inferno
Heartbeats gallop in bigger skips
Embraced in a voluptuous pile
A moment so ageless, so flawless
The embers out in one crescendo.

"A love that shines brighter than a candle is a passionate one. Never let that flame be extinguished."



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26 comments:

  1. brudbergOctober 28, 2015 at 7:39 AM

    What a wonderful sensual poem... made me warm inside.

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    1. MerlinOctober 28, 2015 at 11:51 AM

      I wrote it with that intention of giving a warm feel. Probably had something to do with the material being described and the choice of words.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 28, 2015 at 7:47 AM

    This is my favorite part:
    "So gentle is her gleeful guile
    A hiccup laugh I will never miss"

    I love your blog!

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    1. MerlinOctober 28, 2015 at 12:10 PM

      Thanks so much. It took me a while to get the blog to look the way I wanted it to (a few hours).

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 28, 2015 at 8:21 AM

    From embers to conflagration, delightfully told.

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  4. Katie Mia FrederickOctober 28, 2015 at 8:58 AM

    All things Love are precious and
    bright from the new born song
    to the last
    grasp
    for breath..
    to treasure it all
    is to live.. to live
    away from
    Love is
    to die in
    life.. so
    yes..
    Love..
    a flame
    that never
    shall burn
    out
    for
    me..
    asWeLL..:)

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  5. BodhiroseOctober 28, 2015 at 9:11 AM

    I love this sensual and loving write

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  6. GraceOctober 28, 2015 at 9:35 AM

    And I hope we never forget or let that flame go cold and extinguished ~ Love the passion of your words ~

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    1. MerlinOctober 28, 2015 at 12:11 PM

      I think every writer puts passion into what they write. Thanks for stopping by Grace.

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  7. Victoria Ceretto-SlottoOctober 28, 2015 at 10:54 AM

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  8. Victoria Ceretto-SlottoOctober 28, 2015 at 10:57 AM

    Lovely expression of sensuality, Merlin. So glad you share this. (I removed the previous post because it was on my defunct blog. Well, Blogspot won't let me use my Wordpress blog...one reason I changed. I'm at http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com

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    1. MerlinOctober 28, 2015 at 12:08 PM

      Thank you for reading and sharing Victoria. I'll be sure to check out your blog.

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  9. MaryOctober 28, 2015 at 11:09 AM

    Very sensual & passionate! Beautifully penned.

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    1. MerlinOctober 28, 2015 at 12:12 PM

      I wrote it for my girlfriend considering it was her birthday today. Thanks for stopping by Mary.

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  10. mrs mediocrityOctober 28, 2015 at 1:49 PM

    Yes, sensual and filled with love, and a sweet playful tone as well. The perfect combination if you ask me. :)

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  11. Carol CampbellOctober 28, 2015 at 3:10 PM

    When you find the one, stay! Very nice!

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  12. Pleasant StreetOctober 28, 2015 at 5:01 PM

    So lovely

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  13. Sanaa RizviOctober 28, 2015 at 5:58 PM

    Lovely sensual write :)

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    1. MerlinOctober 29, 2015 at 8:53 AM

      Thanks Sanaa, I tried to capture that emotion as much as possible.

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  14. ayalaOctober 29, 2015 at 4:31 AM

    Sensual and beautiful !

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